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Wave Arms : "If the opponent hits something before the distance is spent, they take damage equal to if they had fallen that distance." I can't recall the falling rules off the top of my head, but this sentence, plus my poor memory would seem to suggest that unless the target gets knocked back 10 yards or more (an unlikely event) they will take no extra damage from the knockback. Just seems to be a functionally useless sentence in regards to the Charm's effects.

Its in there because it can throw an opponent pretty darn far especially when used by somebody very strong and skilled.

Speed of Stillness : I'd make this a flat cost (say, 4m), and base it's effect on the MA's Essence instead of Dexterity.

hmmmm...you know i think i'll use that instead.thanx i'm still goin to make it a 2 per but essence is a better cap.

Tsunami Technique : Not sure about this Charm. Makes Wave Arms nothing more than a speed-bump... but they do both have uses... hmmm... I'll have to think about it (or leave for better minds to comment upon!).

yeah it does make it a speed bump kinda i'll think about some revisions maybe give the speed bump another ability or changing it all together i don't know just yet tho.

Intercepting Fist Meditation : Persistant full-parry... this is not a Terrestrial Charm! A Persistant Parry at the character's MA score, yes. See Five-Dragon-Style for an example of this (IIRC), and tweak yours to suit. Also, it is not an Extra-Action Charm! Simple, or just maybe Reflexive.

It's not a persistant it basically give an independant action that can be only used to cascade into a "Full" Parry so the first is at full pool the second at full pool minus one so on and so forth. Sorry bout the clumsy wording.

Twelve Fold Fist Understanding : I'd lower the minimums for this, and make it not Permanent. 2m Instant Reflexive, towards the top of the cascade. See Jade Mountain Style for other Terrestrial Charms that do this sort of thing...

The minimums are there cause it a permenant thing and i thought it would be cool to for this form to have. Unfortunately i don't own Aspect book Earth.don't really wanna make this charm something you have to pay for cause it just kinda limited for it's prerequisites but it's where it need to be on the tree.

The Final Fist : Seems Celestial in power. And just a better version of the Form, without being called a Form. Why would a MA activate both?

The description of this and the form kinda got muddled and switched but they both do different things. 12 deadly fist form was supposed (curse me and my late nights)to be defensive and final fist is again supposed to be offensive but i kinda got sloppy ( right next to each outhe on the word doc and i did them both simultaneously). With that all said i know i gotta clean these two charms up considerably.Thanx for all your help -Issaru

ya know on second thought it does look kinda celestial i'm gonna clean that up right now. - Issaru

That's all (for now at least...) - Nikink

On second thought i'm just gonna clean the charms(TFF and 12DFF)up a bit and keep them swiched in terms of what they do but i kinda jimmied the power around a bit and got the description down a lil better. Thanx again for all your help - Issaru