CorlanDashiva/Characters
Name:Na'Thal\\ Caste:Changing Moon\\ Nature:Survivor\\ Anima:A large Condor\\ Concept:Barbarian\\
Attributes: (including artifacts)\\ Strength 5, Dexterity 6, Stamina 5\\ Charisma 5, Manipulation 5, Appearance 5\\ Perception 3, Intelligence 2, Wits 5\\
Abilities: Athletics 4 (Flying+3), Awareness 3, Brawl 7 (Natural Weapons+5), Craft (Body Shaping) 5, Craft (Smithing) 2, Dodge 2, Endurance 2, Investigation 1, Larceny 1, Linguistics 1(Riverspeak, Tribal tongues, Old Realm), Lore 5, Melee 2, Occult 1, Performance 1, Presence 7 (Leadership+3), Resistance 2, Socialize 2, Survival 3 Backgrounds: Allies 2, Artifact 3, Cult 3, Resources 3
Virtues:\\ Compassion 3, Conviction 5, Temperance 3, Valor 5\\ Virtue Flaw: The Curse of the Raging Bull\\
Willpower:9\\ Health: -0,-1,-1,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-2,-4, Incap\\ Essence:4\\ Essence pool: Personal 24/ Peripheral 56\\
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Charms: Listed.\\ Combos:</b> Bulleted or enumerated with activation costs and short descriptions.\\
Equipment: Listed.\\
Combat:\\ Base init: 7\\ Soak: LCorlanDashiva/B, (Armor +L/+B)\\ Dodge:\\ Attack:\\ Attack Name 1: Spd Acc Dmg Def (special effect)\\ Attack Name 2: Spd Acc Dmg Def (special effect)\\ Attack Name 3: Spd Acc Dmg Def (special effect)\\
Character Description
A character description should probably contain some sort of backstory, as well as a description of the character's physical appearance and personality.
Expanded Backgrounds
I personally find it really helpful to enumerate each of the character's Backgrounds and expound on them. For example: listing Allies, Contacts or Artifacts, describing your Manse, or explaining how what your Resources represents.