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   | Sta [XX...] App [XXXX.] Wit [XXXX.]  | Conv [XXX..] (3)     Val  [XXX..] (3) |
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-  |  Arch  [.....] *Integ [XXX..]  Craft [.....] *Ath   [XXX..]  Bur   [XX...]   |
+  |  Arch  [.....] *Integ [XXXX.]  Craft [.....] *Ath   [XXX..]  Bur   [XX...]   |
-  |  MArts [X....]  Perf  [.....]  Inves [XXX..]  Aware [XX...]  Ling  [X....]   |
+  |  MArts [X....]  Perf  [.....]  Inves [XXX..]  Aware [XX...]  Ling  [XX...]   |
   | *Melee [XXXXX] *Pres  [XXXX.]  Lore  [X....] *Dodge [XXXXX]  Ride  [X....]   |
   |  Throw [.....]  Res   [X....]  Medic [.....]  Larc  [.....]  Sail  [.....]   |
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   | None... yet.                                                                 |
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   === Description ===

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   | Essence  [XX...] Committed  [7]      | Willpower [XXXXXX....]    XP: [00/00] |
-  | Personal [12/12] Peripheral [21/29]  | Limit     [..........]                |
+  | Personal [12/12] Peripheral [22/29]  | Limit     [..........]                |
   | Str [XX...] Cha [XXXXX] Per [XXX..]  | Limit Flaw: Foolhardy Contempt        |
   | Dex [XXXX.] Man [XX...] Int [XX...]  | Comp [XX...] (2)     Temp [X....] (1) |

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   host to a sheathed straight sword hanging on his left while a knife hilt is perhaps visible on the tip of his right boot. At
   times he wears a brown cloak over this ensemble, worn from traveling the deserts of the South. Worn on his left wrist is the
-  Jade Resplendent Personal Assistant while a simple jade collar is worn underneath the neck of his tunic.
+  Resplendent Personal Assistant while a simple jade collar is worn underneath the neck of his tunic.
   Elegance in Motion:
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   between them. Details are lacking, but Sands obtained the reaper daiklaive in that fashion.
   === XP Log ===

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-  Description:
+  === Description ===
   Wandering Sands is a dark skinned man in his mid twenties with black hair cut somewhat short and blue eyes. He has what could
   be described as a lithe figure of sorts, easily capable of being swift on his feet. His features are somewhat soft, and it
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   Jade Resplendent Personal Assistant while a simple jade collar is worn underneath the neck of his tunic.
-  Background:
+  Elegance in Motion:
   Brilliant Ruby was born to a merchant family within the city state of Paragon, specializing in the trade of various gems
   recovered from the mines throughout the South. It was there he was raised, brought up in the environs of the perfect city
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   somewhat legit means. How he obtained Elegance in Motion however involves
   long negotiation with a spirit in the deep desert discovering that he was in fact an Eclipse by the sight of the bound oath
   between them. Details are lacking, but Sands obtained the reaper daiklaive in that fashion.

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   When Ruby turned the age of seventeen he was given the occasional permission to leave Paragon, supervising caravans his family
   ran that would transport their spoils to destinations throughout the South where there was a demand. He picked up a few tricks
-  of the trade there, showing further apitude but not quite honing it as much beyond the sneaky arrangement or two to benefit
+  of the trade there, showing further aptitude but not quite honing it as much beyond the sneaky arrangement or two to benefit
   his family's business and wealth. He picked up other talents along the way, some skills in survival, some in defending himself
   and a wealth of interpersonal ones as well.

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   | Exalted Character Sheet | Name: Wandering Sands     Caste: Eclipse           |
-  |-------------------------' Player: Zack              Anima: White/Gold Sand   |
+  |=========================' Player: Zack              Anima: White&Gold Sand   |
   | Motivation: Travel the expanses of Creation, sampling the pleasures of each. |
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