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= Crowned Notes =
== on Phoenix of the West, Part 6 ==

First. Yes, I cheated out of describing Sanan's encounter in the oasis;P I'm hardly the first one to use the "I'll tell you the story later" trick, and I admit it's perhaps getting a bit old, but I wasn't comfortable putting it in there. It might make a more useful aside, as opposed to an actual part of the story.

=== Taban and Followers ===
I foresee a great scene in the battle against Lyeshe and Taban;P Now Taban has a hunt, and Lyeshe doesn't!! Though don't forget the Ragara ship in the harbor; good potential there for an awesome battle.

I also foresee the young men that went with Taban as being perhaps part of the "injury by the Dynasty" that was referenced in Part 5.

Yeah, I introduced another character: Tegis. He's named using the Mongolia section of Kate Monk's Onomastikon, same as the other Del`Zahn that Willows included in part 1. Deal with it;P

=== Osol and Lyeshe ===
Osol had her brief little "sinking of spirits" and feeling really low, very nearly broke. Then Lyeshe got back and she got MAD;P

Lyeshe is beginning to get a little afraid, despite his bluster. Stone Face was right; if she'd kept that up, she might very well have found herself facing an Elemental Lens in the face.

=== Ota and Sanan ===

Sanan KNOWS what his name is, but she calls him "Ota" instead:P Honestly. It's not just because I'm too lazy to type out the whole thing every time she says his name. <b>Promise</b>.

Oteitani was perhaps having the first signs of doubt in the first bit there. :) I leave it to others rather or not he latches onto Sanan's little offer of healing, or perhaps reaches out to find his true nature.

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