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Hey, I'm attempting to post some of my stories here. I also hope that this will work properly...

Anyway, what I'm going to do is put links to my stories on this page so that others can reach them (as I can get somewhat verbose at times).

The overall purpose of this page is to get feedback on my writing. Not just what you think of the characters/my ability to write in the setting but also your opinion of my overall writing ability. All comments welcome.

To start with I'm going to post here my original background piece for my current Exalted charcter. Most of my writings at the moment are the backstory for this character (read tham and you'll start to get an idia of why it's gotten so long). If I get enough feedback, I'll start to post more pieces. I ahve several written already, I would just like to know if people want to actually read more of my writing before I actually post it.

As a side note, I don't believe I've broken any established canon here. Bent it and made up things that weren't expressly denied, yes, but never actually contradicted anything in the Exalted books.

Anyway, without further ado, I will link to my first piece (cut and pasted from Word) here: LaelethBackground

And now, I present unto you the second piece I wrote for this character. For those of you that want to know, it is set 107 years before the present, meaning it takes place before the final events of the first piece. PhalonLaelethKaren

And the third piece. This is first a short description of how the prophecies of the Herald of the Unconquered Sun affect other major groups in Exalted, and then a character-relevant story in which Laeleth attends her duties as the Herald... PhalonHerald

I can also be reached by e-mail here: lord_khorne@hotmail.com

Feel free to leave comments on this page or on my thread on the White Wolf Forums (http://forums.white-wolf.com/viewforum.php?f=47 Thread by Phalon about my writings...), and I'll check back periodically to read any such commentary you chose to leave.

Thank you for your time.

26/4/05 - Since there has been a distinct lack of feedback from people, I am not going to post further peices here on the wiki. If anyone stumbles across my stories, know that I have written more and can be reached at the above e-mail address if you are interested. All you need do is ask.

And now, because I can, I'm going to start adding my campaign notes that I want to keep a record of other than my scattered notes. The first such entry shall be for CampaignNightsbloodyTears where I will detail what I've done for him in terms of stats. Comments would be appreciated. Tell your friends and get them to come read too :)

(The campaign does feature my character Laeleth as an npc, so the stories I've written here can be taken as background)

And here I create a link to all the info for my 2E campaign: PhalonExaltedRedux

=== comments ===

Finally made the time to read through this stuff. It is not bad. It'll be interesting to see where these stories go. _[[Ikselam]]

Starting by saying that there are some neat ideas here - I like that you're doing something with Port Calin, which gets very ignored most of the time. ;) However, quick note - rather than formatting things like PhalonExaltedRedux, which creates a top-page that doesn't connect back here, you should be writing it Phalon/ExaltedRedux, which creates a subpage that people can trace back to you. Cleaner and easier. :) <br>
Keep up the good work! - FrivYeti

Phalon: *

2007-07-25T10:52:06Z

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 Finally made the time to read through this stuff. It is not bad. It'll be interesting to see where these stories go. _[[Ikselam]]
-Starting by saying that there are some neat ideas here - I like that you're doing something with Port Calin, which gets very ignored most of the time. ;) However, quick note - rather than formatting things like [[PhalonExaltedRedux]], which creates a top-page that doesn't connect back here, you should be writing it [[PhalonPhalon/ExaltedRedux]], which creates a subpage that people can trace back to you. Cleaner and easier. :) <br>
+Starting by saying that there are some neat ideas here - I like that you're doing something with Port Calin, which gets very ignored most of the time. ;) However, quick note - rather than formatting things like [[PhalonExaltedRedux]], which creates a top-page that doesn't connect back here, you should be writing it Phalon/[[ExaltedRedux]], which creates a subpage that people can trace back to you. Cleaner and easier. :) <br>
 Keep up the good work! - [[FrivYeti]]

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 As a side note, I don't believe I've broken any established canon here. Bent it and made up things that weren't expressly denied, yes, but never actually contradicted anything in the Exalted books.
-Anyway, without further ado, I will link to my first piece (cut and pasted from Word) here: LaelethBackground
+Anyway, without further ado, I will link to my first piece (cut and pasted from Word) here: [[LaelethBackground]]
-And now, I present unto you the second piece I wrote for this character. For those of you that want to know, it is set 107 years before the present, meaning it takes place before the final events of the first piece. PhalonLaelethKaren
+And now, I present unto you the second piece I wrote for this character. For those of you that want to know, it is set 107 years before the present, meaning it takes place before the final events of the first piece. [[PhalonLaelethKaren]]
-And the third piece. This is first a short description of how the prophecies of the Herald of the Unconquered Sun affect other major groups in Exalted, and then a character-relevant story in which Laeleth attends her duties as the Herald... PhalonHerald
+And the third piece. This is first a short description of how the prophecies of the Herald of the Unconquered Sun affect other major groups in Exalted, and then a character-relevant story in which Laeleth attends her duties as the Herald... [[PhalonHerald]]
 I can also be reached by e-mail here: lord_khorne@hotmail.com
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-And now, because I can, I'm going to start adding my campaign notes that I want to keep a record of other than my scattered notes. The first such entry shall be for CampaignNightsbloodyTears where I will detail what I've done for him in terms of stats. Comments would be appreciated. Tell your friends and get them to come read too :)
+And now, because I can, I'm going to start adding my campaign notes that I want to keep a record of other than my scattered notes. The first such entry shall be for [[CampaignNightsbloodyTears]] where I will detail what I've done for him in terms of stats. Comments would be appreciated. Tell your friends and get them to come read too :)
 (The campaign does feature my character Laeleth as an npc, so the stories I've written here can be taken as background)
-And here I create a link to all the info for my 2E campaign: PhalonExaltedRedux
+And here I create a link to all the info for my 2E campaign: [[PhalonExaltedRedux]]
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 Finally made the time to read through this stuff. It is not bad. It'll be interesting to see where these stories go. _[[Ikselam]]