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Talion: * Removed broken versions of Egg Binding Shell and corrected Pre-emptive Eulogy as a Cup charm.

2007-11-09T18:00:39Z

* Removed broken versions of Egg Binding Shell and corrected Pre-emptive Eulogy as a Cup charm.

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== Extra Life ==
DH's Revision 
Egg Binding Shell
Cost: N/A
Duration: Permanent
Type: Special
Minimum Ring: 4
Minimum Essence: 3
Prerequisite Charms: Ox-Body Technique
The Raksha binds a shell around himself to further protect from the ravages of Creation. This charm doubles the number of health levels provided by the Ox-body charm. However when these extra health levels are lost the can not be healed. Instead they are simply regained the next time the appropriate Ox-body is activated (for mutations this would be at the beginning of the next story). The additional health levels provided by Egg Binding Shell are best tracked as a number next to the appropriate health level column (eg two extra -1 health levels would be marked as a 2 next to the -1 column). When the Raksha would take damage at that level, instead lower the number by one. 
The raksha may buy Egg Binding Shell as many times as they have the Ox-Body charm. 

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Pre-emptive Eulogy
Cost: 5 motes, 1 Willpower, 2 Gossamer
Duration: Instant
Type: Reflexive
Minimum Cup: 4
Minimum Essence: 3
Prerequisite Charms: Egg Binding Shell
When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Cup counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again. 
Used against creatures with no Cup Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. Note that acts that would draw attention to the Raksha, such as attacking someone or stealing something important in front those guarding it, are sufficient to re-introduce the Raksha. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.

== Comments (Go on) ==

Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost non-mutation permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -DarkheartOne
: The original extra health level version is seriously broken. I think it could work if the shell acted as a replacement body which doesn't have access to mutations beyond the one selected during purchase but really it could be a completely different charm at that point. I have tried to write up your version, although I made some modifications for simplicity and versatility, so that the Raksha has the option of dropping an Ox-body and reactivating it for extra health when used in gossamer form. -[[Talion]] 
While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect.
Decided to go with DH's version since it is less broken. Also added a note to Pre-emptive Eulogy to clarify what would cause the power to cease working. Not sure if it should be Cup though, Staff maybe?
-[[Talion]]

Talion: *

2007-11-09T17:44:21Z

Talion: * Reply to DH plus extra non-body strengthening charm

2007-08-13T19:16:46Z

* Reply to DH plus extra non-body strengthening charm

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 <b>DH's Revision</b><br>
 <b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
-  <b>Cost: [[NFairFolkBodyStrengtheningCharms/Talion/A]]</b>
+  <b>Cost: N/A</b>
   <b>Duration: Permanent</b>
   <b>Type: Special</b>

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 <b>DH's Revision</b><br>
 <b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
-  <b>Cost: N/A</b>
+  <b>Cost: [[NFairFolkBodyStrengtheningCharms/Talion/A]]</b>
   <b>Duration: Permanent</b>
   <b>Type: Special</b>
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   <b>Minimum Essence: 3</b>
   <b>Prerequisite Charms: Egg Binding Shell</b>
-When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Ring counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again.<br>
+When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Cup counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again.<br>
-Used against creatures with no Ring Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. Note that acts that would draw attention to the Raksha, such as attacking someone or stealing something important in front those guarding it, are sufficient to re-introduce the Raksha. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
+Used against creatures with no Cup Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. Note that acts that would draw attention to the Raksha, such as attacking someone or stealing something important in front those guarding it, are sufficient to re-introduce the Raksha. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
 == Comments (Go on) ==
-Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -DarkheartOne
+Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -[[DarkheartOne]]
 : The original extra health level version is seriously broken. I think it could work if the shell acted as a replacement body which doesn't have access to mutations beyond the one selected during purchase but really it could be a completely different charm at that point. I have tried to write up your version, although I made some modifications for simplicity and versatility, so that the Raksha has the option of dropping an Ox-body and reactivating it for extra health when used in gossamer form. -[[Talion]]<br>
 While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect.
-Decided to go with DH's version since it is less broken. Also added a note to Pre-emptive Eulogy to clarify what would cause the power to cease working.
+Decided to go with DH's version since it is less broken. Also added a note to Pre-emptive Eulogy to clarify what would cause the power to cease working. Not sure if it should be Cup though, Staff maybe?
 -[[Talion]]

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 <b>DH's Revision</b><br>
 <b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
-  <b>Cost: N/A</b>
+  <b>Cost: N[[/A]]</b>
   <b>Duration: Permanent</b>
   <b>Type: Special</b>
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 == Comments (Go on) ==
-Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -DarkheartOne
+Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -[[DarkheartOne]]
 : The original extra health level version is seriously broken. I think it could work if the shell acted as a replacement body which doesn't have access to mutations beyond the one selected during purchase but really it could be a completely different charm at that point. I have tried to write up your version, although I made some modifications for simplicity and versatility, so that the Raksha has the option of dropping an Ox-body and reactivating it for extra health when used in gossamer form. -[[Talion]]<br>
 While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect.
 Decided to go with DH's version since it is less broken. Also added a note to Pre-emptive Eulogy to clarify what would cause the power to cease working. Not sure if it should be Cup though, Staff maybe?
 -[[Talion]]

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 == Extra Life ==
-<b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
+<b>DH's Revision</b><br>
 <b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
   <b>Cost: N/A</b>
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   <b>Duration: Instant</b>
   <b>Type: Reflexive</b>
-  <b>Minimum Ring: 4</b>
+  <b>Minimum Cup: 4</b>
   <b>Minimum Essence: 3</b>
   <b>Prerequisite Charms: Egg Binding Shell</b>
 When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Ring counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again.<br>
-Used against creatures with no Ring Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
+Used against creatures with no Ring Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. Note that acts that would draw attention to the Raksha, such as attacking someone or stealing something important in front those guarding it, are sufficient to re-introduce the Raksha. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
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 Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -DarkheartOne
 : The original extra health level version is seriously broken. I think it could work if the shell acted as a replacement body which doesn't have access to mutations beyond the one selected during purchase but really it could be a completely different charm at that point. I have tried to write up your version, although I made some modifications for simplicity and versatility, so that the Raksha has the option of dropping an Ox-body and reactivating it for extra health when used in gossamer form. -[[Talion]]<br>
-While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect. -[[Talion]]
+While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect.

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 == Extra Life ==
 <b><i>Egg Binding Shell</i></b>
-  <b>Cost: N[[/A]]</b>
+ <b>Cost: 10 motes, 2 Gossamer</b>
   <b>Duration: Permanent</b>
   <b>Type: Special</b>
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   <b>Duration: Instant</b>
   <b>Type: Reflexive</b>
-  <b>Minimum Cup: 4</b>
+  <b>Minimum Ring: 4</b>
   <b>Minimum Essence: 3</b>
   <b>Prerequisite Charms: Egg Binding Shell</b>
-When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Cup counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again.<br>
+When this charm is activated the Raksha declares that they have died and thus can be fought no longer. His player may activate this charm in response to a Sword or Staff shaping attack. The Raksha may immediately make a Ring counter-attack. After the attack has been made the Raksha is considered to have died and must use some method such as Sundering the Gates of Death if they wish to live again.<br>
-Used against creatures with no Cup Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. Note that acts that would draw attention to the Raksha, such as attacking someone or stealing something important in front those guarding it, are sufficient to re-introduce the Raksha. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
+Used against creatures with no Ring Grace this charm functions as a work of glamour. Witnesses will be convinced that the Raksha has died from the most obvious cause available. If the Raksha was being attacked then they believe that the attacker killed the Raksha etc. Further more this belief lasts for the rest of the story and affects anybody who hears of the Raksha's demise. Until the Raksha introduces himself as a new character, the Creation-born will simply ignore him. This power does not work on targets whose Perception + Essence is greater than the Raksha's Larceny.
 == Comments (Go on) ==
-Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -[[DarkheartOne]]
+Hey, DH here. That is potentially very broken, although a good idea. Perhaps it should be a no-cost <b>non-mutation</b> permanent charm that augments purchases of Ox Body by adding a selectable layout of HLs that 'break' and can't be rebuilt until story's end. I'd personally suggest it being one -0 or one -1 and one -2 per time purchased. If you go this route, you might wanna crank the Ring to 4 and the Essence to 3. -DarkheartOne
 : The original extra health level version is seriously broken. I think it could work if the shell acted as a replacement body which doesn't have access to mutations beyond the one selected during purchase but really it could be a completely different charm at that point. I have tried to write up your version, although I made some modifications for simplicity and versatility, so that the Raksha has the option of dropping an Ox-body and reactivating it for extra health when used in gossamer form. -[[Talion]]<br>
-While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect.
+While messing around with the options I came up with another charm which doesn't really belong under Body Strengthening. Will move it later I expect. -[[Talion]]

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