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== The Last Soldier ==

Character Names:Sergeant-Major Donovan Corcoran, "The Last Soldier" 
Exalted Type: Sidereal, Chosen of Battles 
 
Nature: <nowiki>Martyr/Caregiver</nowiki> (haven't decided which yet) 
Demeanor: Monster 
Concept: dogged pursuer of conflict 
 
Apparent Age: 43 
Sex: Male 
Height: 5'11" 
Weight: 185lbs 
 
Anima: Beginning with a dull crimson glow, Sharad's anima wells out into a spiralling cloud of vermillion orbs so close-knit as to seem to be united. Close observation might discern scenes within each sphere - soldiers massing for war, arrows in flight, the fallen hero bleeding to death. They are never pleasant scenes. 
 
Charm Theme: Battle! Chaos, conflict, destruction, pain, glory, brutality, grace, victory. 
 
== Description ==
 
Corcoran's age shows, and shows hard. His features are strong, with prominent cheekbones and nose, a sharp, lean jawline - he was probably rather dashing as a young soldier, but as the bloom of youth faded from him, the dignity of age replaced it. Long days in the sun haven't just bronzed his skin, but have tightened it, lending it a weathered quality, lending his face a sense of wisdom and experience. There's always a twinkle in those red eyes, though it's rarely a mirthful one. 
 
There is a distinct dichotomy to him - he can seem perfectly calm and rational, thoughtful, introspective, but his insatiable taste for violence and simple knack for it have lent him a reputation as a ferocious killer with little beyond bloodshed on his mind. In truth, though, this is an act. The savage abandon he displays in combat, and the endless eagerness for battle is simply his way of acknowledging and utilizing his Mars-given strengths to further his goals; goals which, surprisingly, rarely include his own glory. Within his own mind, he is not the priest of conflict, the sergeant on the battlefield, or even the last soldier. To his own conscience, Donovan is a vengeful sentinel keeping watch over Creation, striking with reckless abandon, frequently to his own detriment. 
 
=== Merits, Flaws ===
 
 
 
=== Attributes ===
 
Physical 
Strength , Dexterity , Stamina 
 
Mental 
Intelligence , Perception , Wits 
 
Social 
Manipulation , Appearance , Charisma 
 
=== Abilities ===
 
Journeys 
 
 
Serenity 
 
 
Battles [Caste] 
 
 
Night 
 
 
Eclipse 
 
 
=== Charms ===
 
=== Combat ===
 
=== Advantages ===

Virtues 
Conviction 
Compassion 
Temperance 
Valor 

Willpower 
 Essence 
Personal Essence - 
Peripheral Essence - 
Total: 
Commited: 
 
Base Initiative 
Soak 
Natural 3L / 7B
Soak 12L / 18B 
Health Levels -0, -1, -1, -2, -2, -4, Incapacitated 
 
=== Backgrounds ===
 
 
=== Notes ===

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 == The Last Soldier ==
-<b><i>Character Names:</b></i>Sergeant-Major Donovan Corcoran, "The Last Soldier"<br>
+<b><i>Character Names:</b></i>(no name yet)<br>
-<b><i>Exalted Type: </b></i> Sidereal, Chosen of Battles<br>
+<b><i>Exalted Type: </b></i> Sidereal<br>
 <br>
-<b><i>Nature: </b></i><nowiki>Martyr/Caregiver</nowiki> <i>(haven't decided which yet)</i><br>
+<b><i>Concept: </b></i><br>
 <br>
 <br>
-<b><i>Anima:</b></i> Beginning with a dull crimson glow, Sharad's anima wells out into a spiralling cloud of vermillion orbs so close-knit as to seem to be united. Close observation might discern scenes within each sphere - soldiers massing for war, arrows in flight, the fallen hero bleeding to death. They are never pleasant scenes.<br>
+<b><i>Age, Apparent Age: </b></i>39<br>
 <br>
-<b><i>Charm Theme: </b></i>Battle! Chaos, conflict, destruction, pain, glory, brutality, grace, victory.<br>
+<b><i>Dislikes: </b></i> <br>
 <br>
 == Description ==
 <br>
-Corcoran's age shows, and shows hard. His features are strong, with prominent cheekbones and nose, a sharp, lean jawline - he was probably rather dashing as a young soldier, but as the bloom of youth faded from him, the dignity of age replaced it. Long days in the sun haven't just bronzed his skin, but have tightened it, lending it a weathered quality, lending his face a sense of wisdom and experience. There's always a twinkle in those red eyes, though it's rarely a mirthful one.<br>
+<i>to come</i><br>
 <br>
-There is a distinct dichotomy to him - he can seem perfectly calm and rational, thoughtful, introspective, but his insatiable taste for violence and simple knack for it have lent him a reputation as a ferocious killer with little beyond bloodshed on his mind. In truth, though, this is an act. The savage abandon he displays in combat, and the endless eagerness for battle is simply his way of acknowledging and utilizing his Mars-given strengths to further his goals; goals which, surprisingly, rarely include his own glory. Within his own mind, he is not the priest of conflict, the sergeant on the battlefield, or even the last soldier. To his own conscience, Donovan is a vengeful sentinel keeping watch over Creation, striking with reckless abandon, frequently to his own detriment.<br>
+<b><i>Charm Theme: </b></i> <br>
 <br>
 === Merits, Flaws ===

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