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<b>Part 5: Daughters of the Evening<br></b>

<b>Part 5: Daughters of the Evening<br></b>

by [[Ikselam]]<br>

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"Uh, yes, I, ah..." Cricket drew herself up and met the man's cool eyes. "That is, my name is Pale Cricket, and I've business with your master. Could you please inform him I have arrived?"

"Uh, yes, I, ah..." Cricket drew herself up and met the man's cool eyes. "That is, my name is Pale Cricket, and I've business with your master. Could you please inform him I have arrived?"

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"Pale Cricket. The seamstress, from the Road of Chrystanthemums, in the Ward of Flowers?" It was difficult to tell if the man's tone was one of withering disdain or polite inquiry. Kestrel suppressed a smirk; the servant's manner reminded him of his own butler.

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"Pale Cricket. The seamstress, from the Road of Chrystanthemums, in the Ward of Flowers?" It was difficult to tell if the man's tone was one of haughty contempt or polite inquiry. Kestrel suppressed a smirk; the servant's manner reminded him of his own butler.

Cricket nodded politely. "Yes, your master has commissioned my work, on occasion."

Cricket nodded politely. "Yes, your master has commissioned my work, on occasion."

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Down the hall, Kestrel heard Cricket laughing. He smiled, standing and listening for a moment, then stepped into his room, closed the door behind him, and flopped down onto the bed. He was asleep before his face hit the pillow, and he dreamed of Cricket's laughter.  

Down the hall, Kestrel heard Cricket laughing. He smiled, standing and listening for a moment, then stepped into his room, closed the door behind him, and flopped down onto the bed. He was asleep before his face hit the pillow, and he dreamed of Cricket's laughter.  

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