CallMeCanon/Machinical - Revision history

CallMeCal: /* Mirror Caste (Szoreny) */

2017-12-27T04:21:42Z

‎Mirror Caste (Szoreny)

CallMeCal: /* Ivory Caste (Isidoros) */

2015-06-17T01:28:56Z

‎Ivory Caste (Isidoros)

CallMeCal: /* Rust Caste (Malfeas) */

2015-06-17T01:27:19Z

‎Rust Caste (Malfeas)

CallMeCal: /* Scale Caste (Ebon Dragon) */

2015-06-17T01:25:51Z

‎Scale Caste (Ebon Dragon)

CallMeCal: /* Ivory Caste (Isidoros) */

2015-06-16T22:28:14Z

‎Ivory Caste (Isidoros)

CallMeCal: /* Ivory Caste (Isidoros) */

2015-06-16T22:27:30Z

‎Ivory Caste (Isidoros)

CallMeCal: /* Brass Caste (Ligier) */

2015-06-16T18:38:33Z

‎Brass Caste (Ligier)

CallMeCal: /* Castes */

2015-06-16T06:28:02Z

‎Castes

CallMeCal: /* Castes */

2015-06-16T06:25:52Z

‎Castes

CallMeCal: /* Glass Caste (Cecylene) */

2015-06-16T06:11:30Z

‎Glass Caste (Cecylene)

@@ Line 26: / Line 26: @@
 Transeuclidian Reliquary <br>
-In the Mirror Castes, the solid bones of Verdigris and sinewy veins of Vitriol float openly in a fleshy sea of quicksilver, tapped from the mighty trunks of Szoreny's own trees, encased in a pliable skin of Moonsilver. There are few shapes, disguises, or identities a Mirror Caste cannot become. <br><br>
+In the Mirror Castes, the solid bones of Verdigris and sinewy veins of Vitriol float openly in a fleshy sea of quicksilver, tapped from the mighty trunks of Szoreny's own trees, encased in a pliable skin of Verdigrised Moonsilver. There are few shapes, disguises, or identities a Mirror Caste cannot become. <br><br>
 === Glass Caste (Cecylene) ===

@@ Line 38: / Line 38: @@
 Alloyed Reinforcement of Flesh<br>
-With flesh carved from the mighty tusks of Isidoros himself, the Ivory Castes are encased in skin of Verdigrised Jade. Ivory Castes are nearly always made with White Jade, though theoretically any color of Jade could be used. In order from most to least harmonic with Isidoros' Ivory, White is by far the best, followed by Yellow, Green, Red, Black, and finally Blue is by far the worst. <br><br>
+With flesh carved from the mighty tusks of Isidoros himself, the Ivory Castes are encased in skin of Verdigrised Jade. Ivory Castes are nearly always made with White Jade, though theoretically any color of Jade could be used. In order from most to least harmonic with Isidoros' Ivory, White is by far the best, followed by Yellow, Green, Red, Black, and finally Blue is by far the worst. <br>
 === Scale Caste (Ebon Dragon) ===

@@ Line 52: / Line 52: @@
 (Caste Charm) <br>
-Rust Castes do not look anything like their name would suggest. The turquoise tinge of Verdigris coating the bright blue crystals of Adamant that make up her skin give her a vibrant, electric-aqua coloration. If her skin is ever broken, however, her brick-red flesh — carved directly from the rusty walls of Malfeas himself — coupled with her green-black Vitriolic blood, provide stark contrast to her outer appearance, and belie her true nature. <br> <br>
+Rust Castes do not look anything like their name would suggest. The turquoise tinge of Verdigris coating the bright blue crystals of Adamant that make up her skin give her a vibrant, electric-aqua coloration. If her skin is ever broken, however, her brick-red flesh — carved directly from the rusty walls of Malfeas himself — coupled with her green-black Vitriolic blood, provide stark contrast to her outer appearance, and belie her true nature. <br>
 == Machinical Magic ==

@@ Line 44: / Line 44: @@
 (Subcutaneous or Exoskeletal) Armor Plating<br>
-The Scale Castes invert the pattern upheld by the other Machinical castes; her flesh is Verdigrised Soulsteel, while her skin is constructed of several overlapping layers of scales from the Ebon Dragon himself. Because of this, Scale Castes enter the vat of vitriol without skin, composed only of blood and bone and flesh, so that the Soulsteel may be properly Verdigrised. A Scale Caste always awakens skinless, the corrosive vitriol that envelopes her body flowing over her naked musculature and through her still-open veins. After she is removed from the vat, only then is she — quite painfully — fitted head to toe with individual interlocking scales to serve as her skin. The Scale Castes are unmatched when it comes to defense, and rarely wear armor or coverings of any kind, as nothing could surpass the toughness of their own hide.<br><br>
+The Scale Castes invert the pattern upheld by the other Machinical castes; her flesh is Verdigrised Soulsteel, while her skin is constructed of several overlapping layers of scales from the Ebon Dragon himself. Because of this, Scale Castes enter the vat of vitriol without skin, composed only of blood and bone and flesh, so that the Soulsteel may be properly Verdigrised. A Scale Caste always awakens skinless, the corrosive vitriol that envelopes her body flowing over her naked musculature and through her still-open veins. After she is removed from the vat, only then is she — quite painfully — fitted head to toe with individual interlocking scales to serve as her skin.<br>
 === Rust Caste (Malfeas) ===

@@ Line 38: / Line 38: @@
 Alloyed Reinforcement of Flesh<br>
-With flesh carved from the mighty tusks of Isidoros himself, the Ivory Castes are encased in skin of Verdigrised Jade. Ivory Castes are nearly always made with White Jade, though theoretically any color of Jade could be used. In order from most to least harmonic with Isidoros' Ivory, White is by far the best, followed by Green, Red, Black, and finally Blue is by far the worst. <br><br>
+With flesh carved from the mighty tusks of Isidoros himself, the Ivory Castes are encased in skin of Verdigrised Jade. Ivory Castes are nearly always made with White Jade, though theoretically any color of Jade could be used. In order from most to least harmonic with Isidoros' Ivory, White is by far the best, followed by Yellow, Green, Red, Black, and finally Blue is by far the worst. <br><br>
 === Scale Caste (Ebon Dragon) ===

@@ Line 18: / Line 18: @@
 === Brass Caste (Ligier) ===
 Strength, Appearance, Perception; Presence<br>
-(Caste Charm) <br>
+Sacrosanct Devotion <br>
 Personally designed and handcrafted by Ligier himself in his great forge, these holy Paladins are made with flesh of Malfean Brass and skin of Verdigrised Orichalcum. <br> <br>

@@ Line 14: / Line 14: @@
 == Castes ==
-The construction of each caste gives an effect equivalent to a Machinical charm, and counts as an automatic installation thereof. This automatic charm has no rerequisites, does not use up a Charm Slot, and has no installation cost. Each Caste has three Caste Attributes and one Caste Ability.
+The construction of each caste gives an effect equivalent to a Machinical charm, and counts as an automatic installation thereof. This automatic charm has no prerequisites, does not use up a Charm Slot, and has no installation cost. Each Caste has three Caste Attributes and one Caste Ability.
 === Brass Caste (Ligier) ===

@@ Line 28: / Line 28: @@
 === Glass Caste (Cecylene) ===
-Dexterity, Intelligence, Perception; Bureaucracy<br>
+Dexterity, Manipulation, Intelligence; Bureaucracy<br>
 Keepers of the Laws of Causality, Glass Castes have flesh forged from the smelted silver sands of Cecylene herself, laced with veins of vitriol and plated with skin of Verdigrised Starmetal. <br> <br>