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CallMeCal: /* Modular Construction Unit */

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‎Modular Construction Unit

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‎Modular Construction Unit

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‎Sample Charm: Factory Cathedral

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‎Sample Charm: Factory Cathedral

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‎Sample Charm: Ultra-Deadly Core Housing Labyrinth

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‎Modular Construction Unit

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‎Sample Charm: Integrated Essence Artillery

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‎Modular Construction Unit

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‎Modular Construction Unit

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‎Sample Charm: Integrated Essence Artillery

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-Additional Construction Points may be gained by adding additional negative traits, but remember it starts with Fragility 2 and Habitability 2, and cannot sacrifice Hearthstone levels as it does not produce a Hearthstone.<br>
+Additional Construction Points may be gained by adding additional negative traits, but remember it cannot sacrifice Hearthstone levels as it does not produce a Hearthstone.<br>
 Traits that give Manses Attributes, Abilities, or Consciousness of its own are generally unnecessary, as the Patropolis has Abilities and Consciousness of its own. Work with your Storyteller to determine if a given trait would improve the Patropolis' own Attributes or Abilities, provide general or localized enhancement to her senses or cognition, or be simply useless.<br>

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 For two Construction Points, the Unit gains the Internal Keyword (requires Storyteller Approval).<br>
-If this Charm has the Internal Keyword and Habitability 0, it may be used to house the Patropolis' Core.
+If this Charm has the Internal Keyword and Habitability 0, it may be given the Core Housing keyword at Storyteller discretion, and if so it may be used to house the Patropolis' Core.
 === Submodules ===
 ==== Enhanced Construction [x2m] (4xp) ====

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 Internal: 2 points<br>
-This Charm adds a Factory Cathedral, complete with automated servitors, to the Patropolis. See <i>Wonders of the Lost Age</i> and <i>Oadenol's Codex</i> for more information on Factory Cathedrals. Work out with your Storyteller the mote cost for Artifact production.
+This Charm adds a Factory Cathedral, complete with automated workforce, to the Patropolis. See <i>Wonders of the Lost Age</i> and <i>Oadenol's Codex</i> for more information on Factory Cathedrals. Work out with your Storyteller the mote cost for Artifact production.
 === Sample Charm: Ultra-Deadly Core Housing Labyrinth ===

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 Internal: 2 points<br>
-This Charm adds a Factory Cathedral, complete with automated staff, to the Patropolis. See <i>Wonders of the Lost Age</i> and <i>Oadenol's Codex</i> for more information on Factory Cathedrals. Work out with your Storyteller the mote cost for Artifact production.
+This Charm adds a Factory Cathedral, complete with automated servitors, to the Patropolis. See <i>Wonders of the Lost Age</i> and <i>Oadenol's Codex</i> for more information on Factory Cathedrals. Work out with your Storyteller the mote cost for Artifact production.
 === Sample Charm: Ultra-Deadly Core Housing Labyrinth ===

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 === Sample Charm: Ultra-Deadly Core Housing Labyrinth ===
 <b>Mote Cost: </b>- [12m]<br>
-<b>Minimums: </b>Essence 10, Intelligence 15<br>
+<b>Minimums: </b>Essence 10, Wits 15<br>
 <b>Keywords: </b>Internal, Core Housing<br>
 <b>Submodules: </b>Enhanced Construction<br>

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 !align="right" | Manse Rating
-| 2 || 3 || 4 || 5 || 5 || 5
+| 2 || 4 || 5 || 5 || 5 || 5
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 === Sample Charm: Integrated Essence Artillery ===
 <b>Mote Cost: </b>Varies [1m]<br>
-<b>Minimums: </b>Essence 8, Dexterity 6<br>
+<b>Minimums: </b>Essence 8, Dexterity 5<br>
 <b>Keywords: </b>Obvious<br>
 <b>Submodules: </b>None<br>

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 !align="right" | Essence Minimum
 | 8 || 8 || 8 || 9 || 9 || 10
 |- align="center"
 !align="right" | Manse Rating
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 Keep in mind that the flavor of these structures is not that of geomancy, but of Autochthonian Magitech. Effects that in manses are produced by harmonizing Dragon Lines, in Municipal Charms are performed by gears and wires and machines and electrical essence.<br>
-Make sure to consult your Storyteller in the process of this design; depending on the features, she may impose Attribute minimums or Charm prerequisites or add Keywords (such as "Obvious"). The Storyteller should at the very least judge what Attribute this particular Unit is aspected to, to determine whether it can go in a Dedicated Charm Slot or if it requires a General Charm Slot.<br>
+Make sure to consult your Storyteller in the process of this design; she should at the very least judge what Attribute this particular Unit is aspected to, and depending on the features she may also impose Charm prerequisites or add Keywords (such as "Obvious").<br>
 For two Construction Points, the Unit gains the Internal Keyword (requires Storyteller Approval).<br>

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 <b>Construction Points: </b>2<br>
 Habitability 3: -3 points<br>
-Fragility 3: -3 points
+Fragility 3: -3 points<br>
 Integrated Essence Artillery: 4 points<br>
 Integrated Essence Artillery: 4 points<br>